by Suzie Eller
A hyperbole is an extreme exaggeration used to make a point.
You might think that hyperbole has no place in nonfiction but if used well it places a bit of fun in your writing. Let’s look at this example from The Best Yes by Lysa TerKeurst:
Drive-thru ordering and my youngest daughter are a bad combination. Brooke can do many things in life. She’s my amazing, beautiful, talented, witty, youngest daughter. Who is amazing. I believe I may have mentioned that already. But she panics at the drive-thru box.
Even if we’ve talked about getting her order in mind beforehand, something always goes haywire. She takes way too long to give me her order. She changes things even after I start placing her order. She confuses me and the poor order taker who isn’t making enough money per hour to deal with people like us.
I feel so awful, like we are breaking drive-thru rules. I know we’re aggravating the people behind us. The cars aren’t honking, but I can feel their stares and glares and the desire for us to hurry up. The tension mounts to where I know a honk is coming any moment now, I just know it is. I’d pull out of the line and circle back around if I could, but you can’t at this drive-thru. There are poles in the ground to keep traffic flowing correctly, so once you commit to going through the drive-thru line, you are committed. Even if your daughter can’t decide. Even if the line behind you is now wrapping around the building.
Even if the order taker is secretly wishing you’d go away. You can’t. I can’t. We can’t.
I sweat. And start smelling like onions. The kind of onion smell coming from a deodorant fail. Seriously. All from our drive-thru order taking too long.
Lysa is using hyperbole to paint a scene. Did she really start smelling like onions? Was she really having a full-blown anxiety attack about Brooke’s inability to order? Most likely, no. However, it did cause anxiety because people were in line. It was frustrating. She took the normal angst we might feel when someone takes too long to make a choice and exaggerated how it made her feel to make this scene come to life.
Today we share two tips to help you use hyperbole effectively.
There are common examples of hyperbole that have been used so often they have become clichés.
- Skinny as a toothpick
- Hungry as a horse
- Big as a house
- Older than the hills
- Could have knocked me over with a feather
If you’ve heard it, skip it.
Refuse to overuse hyperbole
If hyperbole is overused, it becomes satire. That’s great if that is your intention. If not, it is confusing to your reader.
In the first chapter of The Best Yes, Lysa used hyperbole to slip quietly from that exaggerated scene to show the real struggles that keep us from our best yes opportunities.
Hyperbole didn’t overwhelm the book. It complimented it. That’s your challenge too.
YOUR ASSIGNMENT IF YOU CHOOSE TO ACCEPT
- Share one example of well-crafted hyperbole from a nonfiction book.
- Share one cliche you might want to avoid (not listed above).
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